i like much how u worked that lapid! About the global work....... for me that background not is much interesting and also that castle create distraction because its on the same visual line of the gravestone!! So the composition need more breath and another cut too......Peoples dont know rule of the thirds.....this rule is so important! Sometimes is possible broke this rule but in another cases is basic!!In this case the castle go on the right-up-corner and the gravestone on 1 third on the left. The bat and tree its ok. The light emitted by fire need reflection on front gravestone and front ground too..... the light reflection on the tree is + or - ok but need to be less intense. Apart these technical problem the work is nice to be watched because there aren't big tonal problems. This is my opinion based on my experience.
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